Offering and Suggestion Analysis

In this blog, I will analysis my friends conversation about offering and suggestion. My friends are Sabrina Diva and Sespiana from XI Mipa 4. Before I analysis the conversation, I will write the conversation below, after that, I will write the analysis.

My friends had already chosen the topic for their conversation, the topic is about choosing a major at the college. And this was the conversation :

Sabrina : " Hai,Sespi."

Sespi    : " Hai, Sab. Why you look sad?"

Sabrina : " I'm confused."

Sespi    : " Confused about what? Boyfriend huh? :)"

Sabrina : " Hahaha. Of course not. I'm confused about what major I will choose during that college."

Sespi    : " What kind of lesson do you like?"

Sabrina : " I like art culture and also mathematics."

Sespi    : " Hmm, How about architecht?"

Sabrina : " At first, I insisted to choose architecht too, but my mom told me to choose a bussiness."

Sespi    : " I think you should choose the major according to the lesson that you like. Because you                          like enjoying."

Sabrina : " Oh my god, Sespi! You're so genius! Okay, I agree with you. But by the way Ses,                                What major will you choose?"

Sespi    : " I want to choose a medical department in UNPAD."

Sabrina : " Wow..."

Sespi    : " In your opinion, what type of doctor is suitable for me?"

Sabrina : " Hmm.., I think you should choose a love doctor. So, if I broken heart, you can heal it.                         Hahaha.."

Sespi    : "Hahaha... I'm serious, Sab."

Sabrina : " Okay, okay. I think you should choose a pediatrician because you like children."

Sespi   : " Okayy, thank you for your opinion."

Sabrina : " Yaa.."

So these are the conversation, and now let's begin to analysis:

1. First, I will analysis about the offering and suggestion. 

    I think that they had already presented good enough for offering and suggestion. The conversation are when Sespi offered Sabrina to choose architect and she also gave Sabrina suggestioned about choosing the major (the blue line). Sabrina also gave Sespi a suggestioned. Sabrina told Sespi that she should become a pediatrician because she liked children (the green line).

2. Now, I will analysis about the grammar that they used. (red line)

    I think that their grammar are already good. It's just a little bit wrong when Sabrina said ,"..what major I will choose during that college." , It should be better if she said  , ".. what major will I choose later in college.". And also when Sespi said , "Because you like enjoying.", It also much better if she said, " Because you like to enjoy that lessons."

I think that's it for the analysis. Thank you for reading this blog and I'm sorry if my analysis is wrong.

Date : Wednesday, 25 July 2018

Conversation about the additional subject

Conversation about choosing the additional subject.

This conversation were between me and my chairmate in class, Syifa Indira.

After 1 month school break, me and all my friends are going to be a second grade in the High school. We are going to be in one class again because the class will always be the same for 3 years in High school.
There is a different between first grade and the second grade, the different is that in the first grade, we won't be able to choose our additional subject because they all had to be learned at that time, however in the second grade, we must choose our additional subject between Economic and Germany.

Syifa : " Uhhh.. It's so hard to decide the subject that I willl choose!"
Nisya : " Hmm.. I think it depens on you."
syifa : " But how?"
Nisya : " Which one do you like? Economic or Germany?"
Syifa : " Hmm.. Let me think. Actually I prefer Germany than Economic."
Nisya : " So, what do you worry about?"
Syifa : " I asked some people and most of them choose Economic."
Nisya : " Oh, so that is the problem."
Syifa : " To be honest, I enjoy to learn both of them."
Nisya : " Don't be affected by others."
Syifa : " Of course.. It's just a consideration. But Nisya, actually I haven't ask you yet, right?"
Nisya : " Hahaha right!"
Syifa : " So what subject do you choose?'
Nisya : " I choose Economic."
Syifa : " And the reason?"
Nisya : " Because I think it will be useful for me and I like subject that relate to counting too..."
Syifa : " Hmmm great, I think I have decide."
Nisya : "" Sooo..?"
Syifa : " I think I'm going to choose Germany because I like to learn language and I love the accent tho. "
Nisya : " That's great!"
Syifa : " Thanks Nisya for helping me."
Nisya : " Your welcome, it is nice to helping you, Syif."