Offering and Suggestion Analysis

In this blog, I will analysis my friends conversation about offering and suggestion. My friends are Sabrina Diva and Sespiana from XI Mipa 4. Before I analysis the conversation, I will write the conversation below, after that, I will write the analysis.

My friends had already chosen the topic for their conversation, the topic is about choosing a major at the college. And this was the conversation :

Sabrina : " Hai,Sespi."

Sespi    : " Hai, Sab. Why you look sad?"

Sabrina : " I'm confused."

Sespi    : " Confused about what? Boyfriend huh? :)"

Sabrina : " Hahaha. Of course not. I'm confused about what major I will choose during that college."

Sespi    : " What kind of lesson do you like?"

Sabrina : " I like art culture and also mathematics."

Sespi    : " Hmm, How about architecht?"

Sabrina : " At first, I insisted to choose architecht too, but my mom told me to choose a bussiness."

Sespi    : " I think you should choose the major according to the lesson that you like. Because you                          like enjoying."

Sabrina : " Oh my god, Sespi! You're so genius! Okay, I agree with you. But by the way Ses,                                What major will you choose?"

Sespi    : " I want to choose a medical department in UNPAD."

Sabrina : " Wow..."

Sespi    : " In your opinion, what type of doctor is suitable for me?"

Sabrina : " Hmm.., I think you should choose a love doctor. So, if I broken heart, you can heal it.                         Hahaha.."

Sespi    : "Hahaha... I'm serious, Sab."

Sabrina : " Okay, okay. I think you should choose a pediatrician because you like children."

Sespi   : " Okayy, thank you for your opinion."

Sabrina : " Yaa.."

So these are the conversation, and now let's begin to analysis:

1. First, I will analysis about the offering and suggestion. 

    I think that they had already presented good enough for offering and suggestion. The conversation are when Sespi offered Sabrina to choose architect and she also gave Sabrina suggestioned about choosing the major (the blue line). Sabrina also gave Sespi a suggestioned. Sabrina told Sespi that she should become a pediatrician because she liked children (the green line).

2. Now, I will analysis about the grammar that they used. (red line)

    I think that their grammar are already good. It's just a little bit wrong when Sabrina said ,"..what major I will choose during that college." , It should be better if she said  , ".. what major will I choose later in college.". And also when Sespi said , "Because you like enjoying.", It also much better if she said, " Because you like to enjoy that lessons."

I think that's it for the analysis. Thank you for reading this blog and I'm sorry if my analysis is wrong.

Date : Wednesday, 25 July 2018